There is a statement was argued that the weak desire is the main reason of being fail. It is commonly being used by the people who have a higher position to their minor. In this essay, there are some points to show that I strongly disagree with this term.
In order to define success, there are several debates for a long time. On the other hand, people often blame the failure by their weak desire. Whenever pursuing a certain achievement, it also come with a lot of risks and challangings. Sometimes it is due to people lacking related knowledge, or they have other more important problem to deal with. The result is a clear fail. However, We always have a second chance.
Some authorities believe that the strong desire is the key to succeed. As long as their employees encounter a mistake, they always blame them as if they did not have a strong motivation. It is quite common in a family, as parents is unhappy with the misbehaviour of their offspring. These examples shows the misunderstanding of communication. As they are focusing on the result rather than knowing the causes of failure. This would lead to a broken relationship and even worse problems such as depression and mental illness.
Instead of blaming other with their failure, I believe that there is a better way to face the truth. Everyone is not perfect, as we all make mistakes. It is better to encourage with love and help them. The matter is to adjust the attitude, and ready for the next try. What good is it if you win the arguement but lose the relationship with people?
- The diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years. 61
- Failure is proof that the desire wasn’t strong enough.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 61
- All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion. 84
- People eat more processed food than they did in the past, why is this and what are the effects of this? 61
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...pursuing a certain achievement, it also come with a lot of risks and challangings. S...
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Message: You should probably use 'show'.
Suggestion: show
...iour of their offspring. These examples shows the misunderstanding of communication. ...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the misunderstanding of communication. As they are focusing on the result rather ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65217391304 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61971304733 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9588762791 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.2 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16161086744 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425430831738 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499936244179 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987486780771 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363042940949 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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