Famous personalities face many problems due to their stardom, but they enjoy many benefits as well. Do you think the advantages of being famous overweighs the disadvantages?
Prominent persons be they sportsmen, politicians, movie stars or businesses tycoons enjoy a special status because of their popularity. Although being a well-known figure is advantageous in many ways, it has negative downsides too.
The most obvious reason for being famous is social recognition. Everyone in public wants importance because society obliges such personalities, and even a small glimpse of such elites can satisfy an ordinary individual. In many countries like India, the movie stars and TV actors or actresses enjoy God-like status. In addition, due to their uniqueness, these extraordinary humans often reap the financial rewards. Those who manage to resolve someone’s personal matters by their influence are generally rewarded financially.
However, this situation seems to be ideal at first sight; it has pitfalls. Despite the fact that popularity brings in many comforts for life, the aura of their shining image causes security risks. News of life-threating calls, kidnapping, and killing of famous leaders, world-class athletes, and film stars is not common. As such they need to be surrounded by security guards all the time, whether they are relaxing at home or enjoying shopping at a mall or doing a professional job. By not being independent at any time their personal and private life is compromised. Finally, leading a simple life like ordinary people is a far-fetched idea for them as they cannot participate in folklore activities and religious ceremonies during festivals like a common man.
In conclusion, being an uncommon individual appears to be attractive; it is not always comfortable to be popular. From my perspective and that of any right-minded individual a balanced lifestyle, which a person can enjoy without compromising peace of mind, is more satisfying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sing peace of mind, is more satisfying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.475 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08129437088 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.354333382 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266159411166 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804745200456 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465389813403 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156845815093 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527532587051 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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