Although, many people believe that only women are solely responsible for deciding to not to have babies leads while some others believe that women and men both are equally responsible to have or not to have babies. To justify my notion argued further with explanation in the following paragraphs.
Out of all the reasons, the foremost reason is men is mostly responsible to have or not to have babies, because some women handle only house and family. That's why after have babies she have to handle children. Another reason is some men's are married because of grow up their family. They think that women are not able to thinking more or they have not right to live their life as they want. There are many women who want to doing job and live freely. They leave their dreams because of family pressure, some financial problems and many more. For example, in India there are many girls who leave thier dreams for family, doing marriage in early age because of family pressure.
On the contrary, there are many men ans women are think that they both are responsible for having or not to having babies. One child need their father's love, also. Women's are able to handle job as well as home responsibility. Many men's think that for having baby they have tobget permission by women's also, because child like to spent more time with their mother then father. But father also have to spend time with their child for their well upbringing. Parents have ti give knowledge about cate themselves from the outsider.
In conclusion, it can be finally said that mother and father both are responsible for bringing children up.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ome women handle only house and family. Thats why after have babies she have to handl...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...family. Thats why after have babies she have to handle children. Another reason is s...
^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...trary, there are many men ans women are think that they both are responsible for havi...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ies. One child need their fathers love, also. Womens are able to handle job as well ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76512455516 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25299228031 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501779359431 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0709654988 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30695321608 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107646978566 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897804515961 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22431369936 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368607376898 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Sometimes both parents want…
Sometimes both parents want to be free. There will be an overlap of responsibilities. But if a mother. I still want to be omnipotent. Currently, only cooking for my children is a scary worry for me Elastic man
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ome women handle only house and family. Thats why after have babies she have to handl...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...family. Thats why after have babies she have to handle children. Another reason is s...
^^^^
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'thought'.
Suggestion: thought
...trary, there are many men ans women are think that they both are responsible for havi...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ies. One child need their fathers love, also. Womens are able to handle job as well ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76512455516 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25299228031 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501779359431 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0709654988 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30695321608 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107646978566 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897804515961 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22431369936 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368607376898 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.