Although, many people believe that there are too many choices for buying many products. I support to this statement to a large extent for some reasons. My position is argued further with explanation in the following paragraphs.
Out of all reasons, the foremost one is food. There are many varieties in restaurants. For children, adults and old age. People want different foods according their taste. For instance, children like to eat icecream and cold drinks with different flavours. Another, it is also differ in materials of products, brand, design and colors, also. To add to this, there is also variations in price branded companies sale product is high price while non branded companies sale same product in cheap rate, so salarised person xam buy product in cheap rate. As well as, there are many varieties in two wheels like Activa, Shine, Honda etc.
However, I would not overlook the other side too, to begin with if there are lots of variety in market they are confused in product and some time they are cheated buy the owner. For example, there are many brands in shoes like Nike, Bata, etc. In market there are some seller are available who sale same cheap product some person think it's original and buy it.
Thus, to conclude the discussion, it can be finally said that although the fact of there is some product don't have many choices in market. I believe that nowadays too many choices are available in market.
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- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 78
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 67
- Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up rewrite 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...different flavours. Another, it is also differ in materials of products, brand, design...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... of products, brand, design and colors, also. To add to this, there is also variatio...
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Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ere is also variations in price branded companies sale product is high price while non br...
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Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...product is high price while non branded companies sale same product in cheap rate, so sa...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded companies sale same product in cheap rate, so salarised person xam buy produc...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'sellers'?
Suggestion: sellers
...ke, Bata, etc. In market there are some seller are available who sale same cheap produ...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hough the fact of there is some product dont have many choices in market. I believe ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, look, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84146341463 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33950417691 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.3825851448 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4375 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226154572317 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806966439977 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994557564396 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174435319636 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110191070971 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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