Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." To what extent do you agree or disagree? Sample It is recommended to recognize fathers' equivalence to the gendered role of mothers in today's liberalized society. Proponents of feminism argue that women power enables the weaker sex become sole authority to either ensure procreation or belittle it. To counter argue, antifeminists hold tenacity to claim patrilineal association that contributes to raising the progeny. To greater extent, I am agreed to the proposed notion. Chronologically, in mid twentieth century, women liberation movement felt a swing. This wave helped to resume right to vote for women. Since then, women became elected members of government bodies worldwide. Subsequently, women were also felicitous to gain reproductive rights, and realized liberty from the monolithic patriarchal ideology, which had been the most oppressive to all eves. As a result of this, paternity was blithely subdued which had emerged as antifeminism in response to feminist advances. Recently, the white men in developed countries such as, America, England, and Russia; have raised pennant to prioritize paternal support. In such countries, the biological sex of unborn babies is only revealed to fathers. Not only is this, after birth and first cry, new born received by the father evident to acknowledging descent through male line. In addition to this, on the birth certificate, the surname is facsimile father's name. Such Lrivial yet considerable gestures make it realized that allegiance to paternity is similar to maternity, neither less nor more. To conclude, masses of people in developing and undeveloped countries as well, should follow the wake of white men; and revive the instrumental role of patriarchs who are in fact the breadwinners of family. As of my opinion, flawless nurture of kids includes caressing from both genders in unison. Hence, fatherhood is required to be recognized equal to motherhood. Above all, this would assist to develop a gender insensitive society conducive for acute progress.
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having anegative effect on families.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families To what extent do you agree or disagree 77
- "Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." - rewrite 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...men are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, then, well, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39204545455 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99689922398 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661931818182 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2735345527 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30694681856 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070220380884 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146606464217 0.0667982634062 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30694681856 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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