Few say that history is of little or no use in current times. Others believe that studying history is important to understand present. Explain both views and give your opinion
history is an essential for learning as we can learn so many things from history. However, few people deem that, nowadays there is no use or negligible use of history. I would go with thoughts of few people as many parameters have been changing as time passes. I shall elaborate both views in the following paragraphs.
few people believe that there is a little use f history in a current time because technology. In history, technology is limited if we are going to compare it with current era. Let me illustrate it with an example that, at the time of world war, any country does not have sattelite so that they can predict any terror activity before it happens. so if we are going to learn from history then we are not able to use this kind of technology efficiently. so, we must have to create stratergy as time demands. we should use all the tools and technology for making any kind of stratergy or plan. it will be definately different from history as technology has been soaring day by day.
on the other side, many people have perception that studying history plays a vital role to understand present. Up to one extend studying history is important. we can get a lots of ideas as well as some goodness from history. it is also very useful to get a solution of problem. if we are taking an example of Bhagawad Geeta then we have all the solutions that we required as long as we can able to relate it.
After discussing both views deeply it can be said that all people have different perception that whether it is useful to study history or not. But I would say that we shouldstick to present.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59385665529 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53879954917 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511945392491 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8207345634 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7777777778 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2777777778 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225729585109 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857429876571 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827803491909 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15754225317 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343973423628 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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