Figures show that in some countries, there is an ever-increasing proportion of population aged 15 or younger. What do you think the effect of current and future in those countries?
Recently, the growth of population soared excessively among countries, especially in Asia, and has not shown any sign of stopping. In this essay, I will analyze the unfavourable impact of this phenomenon in the present and future.
Firstly, the demand for schools and hospitals is alarmingly high, and will put these children at risk due to the lack of provision. Indeed, this is merely a reflection of failed family planning. For instance, toddlers and adolescents in China and India are not nourished with enough qualified educational institutions, and every year there are thousands of children who dropped out of school. Secondly, this uncontrolled way of birth leads to the belittlement of humans value. Children in an overcrowded family are not provided with sufficient attention and care that they deserved.
In the future, this leads to the critical issue of unemployment. The demand will not catch up with the supply, and workplaces will not be able to admit all of them. Once again, the underappreciation of humans strikes, and making them have no choice but to immigrate. Consequently, this is the cause of brain drain, as youngster in China and India will be moving to another country, because they are not highly recognized up to their ability. Needless to say, the increase of population occurs in countries has to be reduced and minimized.
In a nutshell, population explosion has been a major problem in the last decade. Regarding its negative impact on humans lives in both the present and future, I strongly believe that the reduction of population is immensely important and needs to be acknowledged widely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18473895582 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00594294236 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6798730456 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0504186441985 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195037119345 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361955809312 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0316879129841 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127153741488 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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