Finding job satisfaction is considered to be a luxury in many developing countries. Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The notion “Job satisfaction” has never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates. While there are arguments in favour of the fact that this should be given priority over the job stability, others contend that job security is more important. In this essay, both of these 2 approches will be viewed before reaching an reasoned conclusion.
It is irrefutably true that to live in this modern world, having a life-long job is beneficial to some extent. Firstly, job security always bring a regular salary to the workers, which will undoubtedly help them to meet their basic necessities such as food , clothes or even covering all of your bills. Secondly, in terms of satisfaction, since people do not have to care much about financial problems, a satisfied-life will easily come to them. Instead of of burying their head into series of thinking how can I survived today without a monthly income?, they can wake up each morning doing their job and utilize their leisure time to take up their hobbies.
However, I am much more convinced by the fact that job satisfaction should be high on the agenda. First of all, provided interests, people will easily come up with exceptional ideas, creative ideas and initiatives, which will contribute to the growth of the whole corporations. Besides, people who do a job with enthusiastic attitude will become a great inspiration for all people around them and thereby creat a positive workplace. In contrast, when doing a job with no interest, sooner or later, people will end up in a heavily depressed, autism or maybe mental breakdown,
In conclusion, while job stability will undoubtedly brings many benefits. I strongly advocate that when seeking a job, satisfaction should be given priority over the other approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07534246575 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83729642832 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640410958904 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6491695225 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356925081247 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13938849973 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832128289875 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231130539226 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423055324374 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.