The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000, there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on the British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
it is stated that apart from private cars, other forms of transportation had better be promoted, and international regulations should be enacted to take control of car ownership and use. While I agree with the statement, I strongly believe that citizens should be allowed to use their private vehicles when needed.
On the one hand, people switching to utilizing public transport is of the essence, for the reason that infrastructure in cities is not designed to meet overwhelming traffic load. In particular, traffic congestion is among the most problematic issues in urban areas, which is seemingly unsolvable. Moreover, fumes and gases discharged by automobiles result in severe air pollution, causing respiratory diseases among city residents namely pneumonia and asthma. For example, in Vietnam, a nation where cars have not yet been widely manufactured, imported automobiles are taxed up to 200% for reduction of traffic volume.
On the other hand, people are well-advised to commute by their own cars when necessary because of the inconvenience caused by public transport. In other words, buses and trains are not suitable for certain brackets of people such as the old, the handicapped, pregnant women or infants. Furthermore, commuting time of public transport is considerably longer than that of private vehicles; therefore, unpunctuality at workplace occurs on a regular basis when officers or workers exploit public transit service.
In conclusion, it is of the utmost importance for citizens to travel by buses and trains to eliminate traffic jam and air contamination in big metropolises; however, private vehicles should also be used in some specific cases when speed is essential
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is stated that apart from private cars,...
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Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eliminating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: eliminating
... citizens to travel by buses and trains to eliminate traffic jam and air contamination in bi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43560606061 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0674218101 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5880032333 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.5 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.7 7.06120827912 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167623327368 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648365643894 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860215139899 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110920884001 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101968816517 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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