Forest produces fresh oxygen and participates in regulating climate. But every year, trees cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation. What result may it lead to?
It can't be denied that forest brings us enormous benefits: logs for making furniture, fruits and food for our starvation, and most important: oxygen for our life. However, the area of trees over the world is decreasing day by day. Besides natural reasons, human also has to take responsibilities for this fact. As a rule of karma, deforestation, which is caused mainly by human activities, may lead to many unwanted effects.
One of the main reasons for human deforest is to take as many advantages from the trees as possible to satisfy their needs, without thinking about maintaining the forests properly. Almost everyday, trees are cut down for logging operations. Such precious pieces of wood are brought to factories for making different types of household appliances, leaving the forests empty. Despite there is a few people and organizations that care about restoring these trees, the speed of trees falling exceeds the growing speed of them. Therefore, the total area of forests decreases gradually.
Besides, the activity of eliminating forests opens the road for human habitation and urbanization, which is the current trend of our society. Land does not expand by itself, thus, we make way by invading other creatures' habitats. More and more buildings and factories are needed to supply human due to overpopulation, which urges us to get deeper into the forest and take down the trees to get enough space.
Because of these behaviors to the forest, life of human faces various risks. The most concerning problem is the food insecurity. Deforestation causes soil erosion, which makes crops difficult to grow, thus, less food for human. Another matter is that water can be polluted more easily. Since there is not any tree roots, rain as well as water from other sources can freely flow through the ground without being filtered, which job is of the tree root systems. Last but not least, because trees take in carbon dioxide and emit oxygen for regulating the air, fewer trees also means less oxygen produced and more carbon dioxide stays. The atmosphere will be more polluted, especially with the rapid growth of factories that exhaust into the air. The ozone layer, which is partly composed of oxygen, will be greatly damaged. This is the root of more and more disturbance to human life.
In conclusion, deforestation is worsened due to human activities for different purposes, which are mainly taking advantage of the forest's goods and enlarging habitat. The degradation of forest will dramatically affect our society if we do not have any plan to resolve the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...aintaining the forests properly. Almost everyday, trees are cut down for logging operati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07042253521 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65587481046 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56103286385 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.591784234 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9130434783 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5217391304 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21739130435 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156116787272 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426857126569 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352642370568 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943472440658 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154842659773 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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