Fresh water has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can governments and individuals take to respond to this problem.
It is known that increasing the world’s water need become a crucial common matter. In this essay I would examine the reasons why water scarcity is rising and how to solve it according the ministry and every single person.
In the one hand, there are some causes of enhancement fountain require. Firstly, climate changes create a difference in length of time each season which the summer is longer than the rains in any parts of the world. It is springed by human actions to destroying nature so that produce global warming. For example, there is no plant in big city while many people are using transportation that making lots of polution. However, this situation bring out global warming which induce season transform. In this way, availability of water depends on the rain frequency in every place. Secondly, the escalation of water necessity caused by population growth rapidly. This condition occurs because there are no limit to have children in several countries. For instance, in China, the area which have a lot of citizen has been a population explosion thus clean water requisite increases every summer. Instead, the similar conditions in elsewhere could be allowed.
Nevertheless, to wipe this problem, first of all, every single resident should use water well and wisely to maintain the water cycle. For the model, in the big city, many household using PAM (Perusahaan Air Minum) as a fountain. PAM take out the water from river then filtrate it. If people are wasteful in utilisize this resource, the ford would be dry. This matter would cause disruption of water circulation in nature. In addition, the government should draw the line for their citizen in the maximum number of having children to suppress population growth, the higher number of citizen would create the upper quantity of water necessity. For the exemplification, Japan, the country which have the lower population live possess modest water propotition rather than India, which one the highly number of people inhabit in it
On the whole, these are many causes pertaining to water dearth and should be avoided to protect the existence of mankind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: limits
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Suggestion: a lot of citizens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59847177856 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584045584046 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5969382037 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7894736842 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21052631579 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159296364341 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051317250129 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301291164886 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938527345059 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282466315243 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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