In today's modern era, Technology has wondrously influenced every sphere of life .A dramatic change is noticed in transportation field and there is a possibility that we would be blessed with highly automated vehicles in future . This Trend would have countless advantages despite of handful of disadvantages. This essay will explain the merits along with few demerits in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, the first and foremost benefit of driveless vehicles is related to benefits of society .To be precise, government would not have any need to hire drivers to which will save huge amount of tax collected money of people that could be used to provide better education and basic health facilities to its citizens.Moreover ,there would also be less possibility of accidents which most often occurs due to negligence of drivers .To exemplify 60% of road accidents happen due to drunk drivers and over speed is also responsible for 20% accident on roads .Thus, the automatic vehicles would play a crucial role in regard to the safety of passengers .
On the other hand , the driveless cars buses would have some drawbacks also. These vehicles may be totally technology based .Hence, if they would not be updated frequently,then people of newly located areas would have to face difficulty. furthermore ,this trend will also gives birth to an enhancement of crimes in society which will be the direct result of unemployment .To illustrate,unemployed drivers would bring chaos in society as they would indulge themselves in anti -social activities to earn their livelihood. Thus,unemployment would bring catastrophic changes in the lives of drivers .
To conclude ,although driveless vehicles has few disadvantages yet its advantages can not be ignored as they are related with safety as well as proper utilisation of people hard earned money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, as well as, in regard to, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28231292517 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09732997881 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.498654632 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.555555556 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220610744814 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893725650742 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535644885582 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140814941945 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140920952526 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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