With growing recent advancements of internet with emergence of many online platforms,
many consider that purchasing of printed newspaper or books will cease to exits in the future.
Considering the convenience and financial factors, it is believed that nobody will buy printed materials such as newspaper and books because they will be available online for free at any time.
Firstly, people are becoming more and more active online then ever before. Many news outlets proactively changed their medium to online platforms to adopt this change. Whether it Facebook or YouTube you can watch and subscribe your favorite news outlets. As people could get easily updates about its local and international changes for free while being online, it is reasonable to predicate that people would have on need to buy newspaper everyday.
Secondly, there are hundreds of applications with free educational materials regarding every subject. One can get online any book in pdf form from many educational platforms. Even if it is old one can upload it by scanning it online to make free available for others. In addition to this, every institute has online portal for subject materials which also provides books and materials for students. As we are in age of free information sharing, it is considered that purchasing of printed books will vanish in future because of its free availability.
In conclusion, people will shift towards free available options, Instead of paying for hard form of newspaper and books. And it is more promising because not only this trend is cost effective but also environmental protective.
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- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... newspaper or books will cease to exits in future. Considering convenient and financial...
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Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...d financial factor, it is believed that no body will buy printed materials such as news...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...body will buy printed materials such as news paper because they will available online for ...
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Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
...online platforms to adopt this change. whether it Facebook or YouTube you can watch an...
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Line 6, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be your favorite news outlets. As people could get easily updates about its local...
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Line 6, column 433, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...e that people would have on need to buy news paper every day. Secondly, there are hundr...
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Line 10, column 101, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ons, Instead of paying for hard form of news paper and books. And it is more promising bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23921568627 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70396067028 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8943341731 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223283516082 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768012037874 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624859492275 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128902662158 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556326336173 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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