Nowadays, the trend of e-reading and learning is increasing globally. This has a lot of impacts on our society but the most influencing one is the decline in sales of books and newspapers as more and more people are able to read them through the internet.
However, I do not accord with the given statement as I believe that there is a section of society which prefer to read from hardcopies rather than virtual ones. This essay shall discuss the reasons behind my disagreement with some examples.
With the advent of technology, every errand can be run through computers and mobile phones. Although books and daily news can be read online with lower or no costs at all, it can never replace the satisfaction received after reading them physically. For example, most elderly people have the habit of picking up the paper as soon as they wake up. No matter how simpler using the Internet can be, it seems inconvenient to them to read the news online as they are used to their old patterns and it is not easier to adapt to this new technology.
Moreover, there are many families who are concerned about their children's health. For instance, a study conducted in Manitoba's institute of technology, revealed that more than 75% families all over the world want their children to learn and read from real books as the impact of electronic books is very well known to be deteriorating on their overall health. It leads to their hindered physical growth and slow development of cognitive skills.
Furthermore, as printing media gives employment to many people, the government is unlikely to let online media take toll over it. Otherwise, it will not be helpful to them in the upcoming elections time.
To conclude, it is irrefutable that reading online saves a lot of money yet, the complete withdrawal of printed books and newspaper is very unlikely to happen in the coming time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85139318885 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62096201075 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582043343653 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4350957957 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238962308058 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697409266469 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398923548309 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10732662766 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297021553554 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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