People believes that in the future they will access the information and knowledge that provided in newspapers and books only from internet because it will be free of charge. However, this condition will be affected, both positively and negatively, the daily life of the people.
We should aware that not all books and newspapers that scattered online in internet are free of charge. If we found them freely on internet, it didn’t mean that they are not charged. Firstly, we could get the books or newspapers illegally via untrusted website. There is enormous amount of websites that provide the hijacked books or newspapers. The safety of the website is also unknown and have a chance to harm our computer. Secondly, if we access the books or newspapers illegally, it will violate the copyrights and inflict the financial lost for the creators. They will not gain the money from their works because it hijacked.
On the other hand, it is possible that the printed books and newspapers will be liquidated and replaced by online books and newspapers. First, the Covid-19 pandemic make people to limit their daily activity, this included going to bookshops. So, it is reasonable if they chose to get them on the internet because it easy and free. Secondly, the online books and newspapers is not harming the environment because it is paperless, so, it will be a good option to save the planets. It also not need a lot of space for store them in our room. Thirdly, the books author and newspapers agency still have a chance to get profits by the advertisements that provided in the website.
In conclusion, most people still have buy the printed books or newspapers because they did not have a proper knowledge to get the books or newspapers freely, safely, and legally on internet. I agree that by the advancement of the technology, all people will have free access to get the books and newspapers on the internet.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 70
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 553, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'books'' or 'book's'?
Suggestion: books'; book's
...or store them in our room. Thirdly, the books author and newspapers agency still have...
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Line 7, column 39, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'bought'.
Suggestion: bought
... In conclusion, most people still have buy the printed books or newspapers because...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'proper knowledge'.
Suggestion: proper knowledge
...or newspapers because they did not have a proper knowledge to get the books or newspapers freely, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86280487805 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6624617896 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439024390244 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5868166928 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8235294118 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311660802734 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108856972501 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794371285933 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224024113675 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371230482089 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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