The gap between the rich and the poor becomes wider. What is the causes of this?
What can be done to solve this?
There is no doubt that the distance between the rich and the poor has increasingly becomes broaden. While this is becoming a serious social issue, it is definitely not impossible to lessen the gap. This essay will evaluate the unequal distribution of wealth as the main cause and suggest a viable solution to the problem.
The primary reason for the widening of the gap between the rich and the poor is the uneven distribution of resources. This happens because most rich people controlled the profitable corporations making them richer while the majority of the poor workers received less proportion of corporate income in the form of salaries. For instance, in a recent research at the University of Queensland, it claimed that only 10% of the population belongs to the affluent group while approximately 70% were included in the marginalized group in the society. This is clearly evident that unequal distribution of income justified the gap between the rich and the poor.
The best way to confront the gap in the society level is to improve the education system. This can be done by allocating more funds in building a school infrastructure and improving the teaching skills in the educational institutions. For example, in the economic survey conducted by the UK government, it found that most residents expressed their interest for a free university education. In contrast, if the government will not make the university education free to anyone, only the wealthy students can afford the high cost of university courses and therefore the gap will continue to expand.
In conclusion, although there is an extensive gap between the wealthy and poor people, this problem is not insurmountable. The government should address this issue by implementing intensive programs to improve the education system.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240506329114 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.126582278481 0.155533422707 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123417721519 0.0946595960268 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0348101265823 0.0501214627716 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0158227848101 0.0437548338989 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136075949367 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0316455696203 0.0403226058552 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96791776194 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0253164556962 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.174050632911 0.0861772015684 202% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0189873417722 0.021408717616 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1816.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.21917808219 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397260273973 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335616438356 0.28420135186 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232876712329 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154109589041 0.137316102897 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96791776194 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.037074148 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.1935976936 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4615384615 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9328635107 49.517814964 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.692307692 127.492653851 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 56.0231822972 49.1944974215 114% => OK
Elegance: 2.30357142857 1.69124875643 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.647153093443 0.332605444948 195% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.159070037344 0.102741220458 155% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0741902860409 0.0668466124924 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.693498732989 0.534860350844 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0862926968461 0.148594505496 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.356073783566 0.134430193775 265% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108588735119 0.0742795772207 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.553874343928 0.324371583561 171% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0766878010752 0.0638462369009 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.498065376014 0.228012699653 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703246559197 0.058150111329 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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