In these day and age, unequal distribution of wealth is one of the major problem faced by the people and it create a economic disparity between affluent and needy people. This situation can cause numerous problem however, certain steps can be taken to tackle this issue.
There are multifarious reasons behind this issue. Firstly, the crime rate will increase because, economically weaker people deprived from basic needs and resources. So thats why they indulge themselves into a illegal activities. For example a recent survey showed that 60% poor people engaged in unlawful activities like abduction, pick - pocketing and so on. just for the sake of money. Secondly, due to the gap between eminent and poverty stricken people, it leads to increase in discrimination. In addition to this, children belongs to ultra poor families are deprived from education while wealthy kids get supplementary facilities including education.
On the other hand, despite having some problems, there are several solutions can be taken to solve this issue. It is a responsibility of a government to raise free education system so that everyone get an education just free of cost.
As a result, they get employment and fulfill the needs and wants. For instance, Delhi government, provide a free education for everyone, which is beneficial for reducing the level of disparity between both people. Moreover, higher authorities also implement the balance taxiation system. Heavy tax will be calculated on luxury items like branded products which is mostly bought by the wealthy people.
In conclusion, although, gap between wealthy and downtroden people is a mammoth problem in world, it can be solved by awareness programme, free education and employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34671532847 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83840485991 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0081837265 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.085328328737 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025678182531 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302372269251 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447648210676 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284469496399 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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