Global warming is one of the biggest threats human faces in the 21st century and sea level are continuing to rise at alarming rates.
What problems are associate with this and what are some possible solutions.
Climate change is the main danger human race is facing in this century, also ocean levels are increasing with a fast pace. There are plenty of problems linked to this, however, this essay will discuss the major problems, which is flooding of residences-and probable solutions to this.
Billions of people live on the coastal area, so even some feet of change in the level of water could be catastrophic. Rise in the temperature is one of the reasons of melting of ice from Himalayas and Antarctica etc. results in increase in sea-water level causes many issues. People lose their property, assets and not to mention many become homeless. Unfortunately, this reminds devastating moment happened in Japan in 2011, Tsunami, many individuals lose their family, home, and also hope.
Calamity like this is most of the time gods act so as a human we could only ease the suffering. Possible solution to this is to build flood barriers. Flood stoppers like dams, and floodgates ought to help reducing water level and possibly flood. These flood defenders should be located such that flood water will not reach in populated area. Flood prone country, Srilanka, has built such defenders, also they have restricted people to build houses in the close vicinity of the water.
To conclude, it is certainly true that because of the global warming ocean levels are rising, but flood preventing techniques would help to reduce the suffering. Many countries must adopt flood prevention techniques like Srilanka to save their citizens from catastrophe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to devastate'.
Suggestion: to devastate
...e homeless. Unfortunately, this reminds devastating moment happened in Japan in 2011, Tsuna...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...like dams, and floodgates ought to help reducing water level and possibly flood. These f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13492063492 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60068115193 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9105156571 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144823138685 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520225164048 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411237197022 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088736400512 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419549204638 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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