Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?
In the las decade, global warming has become a major cause of concern in many countries. There are a variety of possible reasons for this issue, but measures can be definitely taken to deal with it. This essay will look at reasons for this and propos some solutions.
One of the main causes of global warming is that excessive use of fossil fuels by humans. Factories and vehicles produce emission and exhaust fumes which lead to global temperature to rise. As many developing countries are becoming industrialized, emissions from factories are expected to increase. Another issue which may cause global warming is the number of cars on streets is growing all the time. In fact a majority of people prefer to use private cars because of inefficient and high cost of public transport. A further complication can be cutting down trees which are due to population growth. Population growth is directly related to increase in the demand for food and accommodation so we have started destroying the forestland for construction and cultivation.
The governments should focus their attention to overcome the problem of global warming. Regarding increased amount of fossil fuels emissions, the governments could impose stricter environmental standards to force people use environmentally-friendly alternatives like solar or wind power to run their cars and also factories. The problem of deforestation can be addressed by managing the rainforests that one of the simple ways is that removed trees must be replaced by planting young trees. Another major step is that the government should allocate enough budgets to modernize the transport systems. If the transportation infrastructure was improved and the ticket prices were slashed, more people would be encouraged to use public transport rather than their own cars.
By way of conclusion, human activities are a major factor in the rise of the global temperature. So the governments should apply some policies like tree planting plans or developing renewable energy to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'las'' or 'la's'?
Suggestion: las'; la's
In the las decade, global warming has become a maj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, regarding, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30959752322 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09488525705 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4687108461 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.882352941 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208744902666 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700527517336 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795533095541 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124377621078 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03645248498 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.