People have different views about the celebrations of national holidays. While many people believe that they are money wastage, I would argue that the benefits of traditional holidays outweigh its drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is understandable why some people hold opposition against it. Firstly, long-lasting holidays can have some detrimental effects to the economy. As many holidays could lasted around one or two weeks, that means many businesses and workers also stop functioning results in a loss of a considerable amount of money. For instance, Vietnamese traditional Tet festival is a two weeks holiday where almost every companies shut down for celebration. Secondly, a significant amount of money is wasted to celebrate holidays. A great amount of money is being expended by governments and people for holidays preparation, which usually lasts for a short period of time. For example, many Vietnamese families purchase a kumquat tree of a cherry blossom during Tet, and they are probably going to dump it after 2 or 3 weeks.
On the other hand, I believe we should keep celebrating national holidays for some reasons. The first reason is that celebrate traditional holidays is a way to preserve cultural identity. By doing traditions and customs of their own culture, old individuals can pass the cultural heritage of their people to younger generation. These practices play a crucial role in cultural loss prevention. Additionally, traditional holidays have positive influences on tourism industry. Big holidays or festivals are great ways to enhance countries' image as well as attracting tourists. For example, just like any famous tourist attractions, many people visit China every year to take part in Chinese New Year, hence brings great benefits to local residents.
In conclusion, while I agree that there are some drawbacks of celebrate holidays, I believe we should keeping these practices due to its benefits.
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- Ielts writing task 1 11
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Festivals bring happiness in humans life and it leaves the memorable moments in their life.The legal bodies as well as citizens spent huge amount of their money to celebrate these national events.I partially agree with the given argument and would like to disclose my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
The two main point of spending excess amount of money to celebrate national eves by both legal authorities and individuals. For one thing is probably that,people can get together with their near and dear ones on these events.They can spend their quality of time with their,which would ultimately help to create strong bond between their relations.That is why, folks like to spent huge amount of money to celebrate national festivals.Another thing may be that,both folks and governments may like to spent maximum amount of their money to show-off their status to other persons and nations.For instance, Indian government paid huge proportion of their money to celebrate international yoga day, independence day and republic day in every year.
In spite of this, why governments should not spend too much to celebrate national events.The first obvious fact might be that,spending money to celebrate national events are wastage of money.So, governments should pour their money to provide better infrastructure in the form of roads and so on.They can also invest their money by building new factories or companies, which would provide jobs opportunities to natives.Therefore, it can helps to demolish unemployment rate in the nation.The another fact may be that,individuals can donate their money to non-government organisation and these organisations can invest these money for clothing,shelter,education and medicine.As a result, it would helps to improve the life of orphan kids.
In an epilogue, it can be said that, governments and citizens can spent their money to celebrate national eves.but it should not be in excess manner.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'last'
Suggestion: last
... to the economy. As many holidays could lasted around one or two weeks, that means man...
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Line 3, column 661, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ration, which usually lasts for a short period of time. For example, many Vietnamese families ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34640522876 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94121278118 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2221815924 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2352941176 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126595392862 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406067567705 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400132466321 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796812291104 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024132976574 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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