It is widely believed that the ministry ought to set out extra safety to its inhabitants. Even though some people insist that authority needs to lay out wealth on security, i believe the capital should be contributed equally to protection and social benefits such as public education and infrastructure. This essay will first discuss the significance of investing finances on defence and secondly, the rationales behind allocating funds for education and groundworks with relevant examples.
To begin, generally speaking, military spending provides copious funds that prove truly instrumental for b...
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Better to keep relatively equal length for the second paragraph and third paragraph. or relatively more content for the third paragraph since it is the one to make agreement.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 315 350
No. of Characters: 1771 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.213 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.622 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.946 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.234 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.3 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.01 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ty needs to lay out wealth on security, i believe the capital should be contribut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76825396825 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03307375564 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679365079365 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6094808652 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.769230769 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920668160983 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273219558801 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268831112435 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472047691037 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206392781216 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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