Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution, and airport construction. One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations.
Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.
Do you agree or disagree?
In the last decades, the proportion of air flights has surged significantly in astounding ways. An increased quantity is generally fully liable to sound, impairment and airport formations. It is widely believed that the soar in cut-rate traveler flights to vacation terminals are the paramount determinant of problems. I completely agree that levying high taxes can diminish the journey. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, taxing airlines can notably dwindle the percentages of low-priced wanderer flights frequently to holiday stations. Since the budget a...
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Essay evaluation report
there is a high probability that the local employment will fall substantially for these immigrants are the leading roots of foreign currencies,
description: better not to follow a complete sentence after 'for', may use 'because'
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 2017 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.379 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.984 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 127 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.438 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.219 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.278 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.025 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, so, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50933333333 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06879230679 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642666666667 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2199223796 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.125 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110376296336 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322869290098 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233650765684 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541140209198 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335604577032 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.