The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer
Debate on tobacco cigarettes restriction has recently become heated in all the societies. Some people state that smoking has to be prohibited, even though this measure may encroach upon inherent liberties. I strongly agree with this opinion and I believe that public areas ought to be free from poisoning ourselves.
First of all, puffing nicotine in crowded areas is considered detrimental not only for a smoker but for the others at close vicinity. This means that this habit entails massive health threats to the vast majority of citizens. Therefore, the government is obliged to tackle this issue fue to the fact that one of its indispensable responsibility is protecting its people from any possible harm. For example, many developed countries have issued such a law, which has resulted in curbing lung cancer by high margin compared to less initiative nations . In other words, life expectancy of population will soar, while the smoking-oriented budget expenditure on health will plummet.
Secondly, Smokers' productivity tends to eventually diminish, which in its turn causes difficulties at the workplace. This is because a cigarette comprises dozens of toxic elements that pose a threat on wellbeing of a human. Nevertheless, a tobacco consumer may feel energized and contented, they will plunge into the state of tiredeness and depression over time. The recent study concluded that a person affected by constant nicotine intake is as threefold as likely to develope chronic fatigue and insomnia. Thus, smoking ban in public public areas may reduce the harmful effects on the body, as people will certainly reduce their rate of consumption.
To conclude, I think the governmental interference to the smoking rules is a sound idea as it facilitates to improve the health of the country and to boost humans' wellbeing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, i think, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29553264605 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94044494203 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652920962199 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.0958367146 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202879979461 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590229672585 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505819500598 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10907105919 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667034230547 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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