, the government should invest funds in teaching other subjects as many as science.do u agree or disagree
In my opinion, science or other subjects are extremely important. All of them play crucial roles to expand and develop. Therefore, the government should invest funds in teaching other subjects as many as science.
Firstly, other subjects like art, music, sport,...etc are necessary and not useless. If students just focus on learing science, they will not really care about other subjects. They will be disregard although they are aslo usefull and meaningful. They provide students knowledge about history, geography, achievement, tradition, etc of their countries. Besides that, students are taught about soul and emotion carefully. As a inhabitant, each students must understand and know about their own countries. Therefore, forgetting other subjects is perilous.
Finally, funds of teaching science will only promote science, of course. Lots of students learning science will apply for scientific jobs. this situation can makes a great lack of employees in other sectors. Some scientists are unemployed because the government has got enough. In contrast, other sectors of economy lacks employee. This stituation can make a financial burden because employment. Otherwise, other subjects can aslo bring a great number of profits. Funds of art, music, sport,etc develop entertainment field. The government can invest money to build meseum, art gallery, stadium,... Visitors will come to see them everyear if they are special and high-quality. Therefore, the government can earn a large amount of money from other subjects.
In conclusion, I think the government should invest funds in teaching both science and other subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, really, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68292682927 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80748082372 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593495934959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.5247011036 49.4020404114 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.5454545455 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1818181818 20.7667163134 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345473970051 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108277946991 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153958451182 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315614969233 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185468791259 0.056905535591 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.48 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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