Government should invest more money in science education rather than other subjects to develop the country? Do you agree or disagree?
Science education is one of the most important subjects for which the government should invest a lot of money for economic development. Therefore, I agree with this view, we should do it now.
There’s no denying that science can be applied to all areas of social life. Science is born to serve our lives, once there is a difficult problem that humans cannot solve we have to rely on science. It helps improve the quality of human life through inventions such as computers, phones, vehicles and drugs. When people are educated to master technology and science, the quality of work will be better from which will develop the country's economy. Recently, the Covid-19 epidemic is happening in a very complex way, causing thousands of deaths worldwide, thanks to the research of scientists who have somewhat limited the repelling virus thanks to their advice on how to prevention and body protection for people.
Besides, stimulating creativity and passion of the learners. Science is something very mysterious that requires researchers to find creativity, and a genuine interest in the field. Investing in science education also needs to be thoughtful and deliberate, because it takes a lot of time but instead it will help to produce a future generation that loves science and always wants to invent things that society needs. Seeing a typical example from Japan during the Meiji period, which intensified education reform with the idea that "Japanese spirit - Western technology" has turned Japan into an intellectual nation and transformed profound change in education.
Therefore, investing in scientific education is a very right thing, it will create favorable conditions for economic development and people in the future.
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| 2020-03-22 | Nguyen Manh Dung | 89 | view |
| 2020-03-19 | Nong Thao | 84 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30797101449 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87858092706 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648550724638 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8688366873 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207094120738 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068517411175 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713588843437 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138048464983 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928735008325 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.