It is argued that science education more valued for growth of country’s advancement than other teachings and government spent more money to this. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that investment in other subjects is equally important. The essay will first look at the impact of science and technologies on our lives and then discuss why modern society demands in soft skills.
First of all, we know that the technology advanced in recent years. Due to rapid growth of science our life has indeed been changed positively. With a great deal of advantages we collide (face) constantly. For instance, laptops, cell phones, modern appliances help us our daily tasks to be completed faster and more effectively. Besides, owing to innovative developments the medicine has reached a higher level.
However, this does not indicate that science is the an exclusive factor that carries forward modern society. The prosperity of society as well obtains from other main causes and factors. Therefore, in order that a nation can be developed, each person needs receiving an entire well-rounded education, not only teaching sciences. For example, all mass media, entertaining performances, programs and so on were established by creative ability peoples. Such subjects as literature, arts and other soft skills promote huge contribution to train intellectuals and highly skilled workers – the driving force of an advanced society.
To conclude, I strongly believe that other subjects have their own values in a country’s growth progress because they contribute to the comprehensive development of people.
- The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 33
- The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49402390438 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9656263694 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685258964143 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1797574318 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268614507747 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074878694664 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974528605298 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159764422465 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102223890378 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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