Transportation have become one of the most essential necessity of today,s era while it is of goods or people themselves. There are different means of transportation such as rails ,areoplanes and road running vehicles.It is often argued that government should spend more money towards construction of rail tracks as compared to roads.I Completely agree with the notion and discuss the same in my essay.
First of all, trains can transport people from one place to another in less time because trains doesn,t face any kind of traffic congestion on their way. So it will save the time of commuters .Moreover, trains offer a very cheap service, which means people from any walk of life can afford to travel through trains.
Furthermore, locomotive train engines cause very less pollution to environment whereas vehicles running on roads are great contributers of pollution and they are using a very large quantity of fossil fuels. Although trains also helps in carrying goods from one state to another thereby contributing towards the economy of the country.
To sum up, i believe that there is no single conclusion. An effective clap requires both use of hands. Government should spend the funds wisely by considering all the factors such as environmental Situation of the area .They should allocate funds by considering the needs of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, kind of, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16513761468 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80432469894 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665137614679 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5583467827 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.111111111 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0963517973369 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318506114213 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06168403164 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0577794324502 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061243916393 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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