governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people claim that government should allocate more budget on railway system rather than Roads, while I strongly believe that road investigation is an essential issue in each community.
Firstly, travelling by train may cost more than Road trips. As an example students who Study in other cities are constantly commuting to their home cities and it's more beneficial for them to have trip roads. Also, there are many people who have to work at different cities and must spend most of their time on roads, they may cannot afford train expenses. So road trips seem to be a logical choice for them rather than taking train.
Secondly, trains are much faster and convenient for far destinations, people who are taking a short trip prefer road trips because it sounds more logical for them. They can easily get on their car, start the engine and drive to their destination and get there without difficulty.
Moreover, it will cost more for government to expend money on railway system instead of roads. Roads can be secured in order to decrease road accidents by spending less money on it. To improve road transportation there needs to renew and reconstruct roads.
To conclude, although some people think it is better to spend money in railways rather than roads, in my opinion because of low costs of road trips and sometimes short destinations, people choose Road travelling. So government should take this into consideration. Also, it will be more economic for government to spend money on roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to train'
Suggestion: to train
...r time on roads, they may cannot afford train expenses. So road trips seem to be a lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5686713613 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551587301587 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3410851301 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197391586488 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870599274361 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649269700427 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13447901751 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902988574228 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.