Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads .
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
With an increase in the population , the need for an effective transportation network has arised. It is often debated by some that governments should spend their funds on building railways rather than extending network of roads .While building roads can solve the traffic problem to some extent , I however, agree with the above argument because railway systems are more efficient.
People who are against spending on railways might argue that it is better to spend on already present roads than constructing new rail tracks and that by expanding roads , the large metropolitans can easily manage large amount of cars. As an illustration, Karachi, largest city of Pakistan has network of highways which manages traffic, without having a rail system. However, this essay believes otherwise and is in favour of spending on railways as large proportion of people don’t have cars.
Investing on railways should be the priority of governments because they are very productive . Trains , on one hand, has the capacity to transport thousands of people in a very less cost and on the other hand, will decrease the dependence on cars, and hence the burden on roads will fall. It is exemplified by the tube system in Portland which is estimated to carry 1 million passengers a month, which are more than any highway in the city And has also helped to manage traffic as more people are opting for train tavel rather than taking their cars.
In conclusion, although roads make an integral part of the transportation system , governments should allocate more funds for construction of railway networks because they are more productive and can manage the heavy traffic better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15073529412 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72278398173 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536764705882 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8234456175 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235810257477 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977061860588 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811944232702 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148921393855 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647904939542 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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