Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Hardly can anyone deny the paramount importance of decision in the life, especial children because decision on each day helps children develop themselves. some people hold the view that allowing children to give their settlement will help them gain a lot of merits in their life while others think that this will bring some disadvantages for the development of their child. this essay will discuss both view and express my perspectives.
On the one hand, giving own choices brings many merits for the young, especial children. Firstly, children’s decisions give them a lot of experiences when they grow up. Beside that, the young give their settlement when they are child, which helps them feel more confident when they are mature. therefore, they can solve many difficult problems in their life. this leads to their successes in their life. In addition, giving their determinations when they are child will bring independence.
On the other hand, deciding when they are too young also brings some demerits. The first reason is that giving own choices when people are too young will make them become dictatorial. In other words, if people give their decision too early, they only think of themselves, which makes them do not care of everyone’s thinking. therefore, they cannot take part in teamwork and social activities.
In conclusion, giving own choices when they are too young brings not only advantages but also disadvantages. To my way of thinking, deciding when they are child will help them develop themselves. However, their parents also look after their development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2578125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71785186314 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51171875 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9941856534 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.125 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129315081347 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542859344235 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424491687143 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930973119599 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261500382108 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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