Governments Should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is irrefutable, that railway being one of the most dependable form of transportation in our countries, so proper change and restructuring is required to keep up the increase in commuters.In way to deal with such scenario government should invest money in improving railway network rather involving much on road improvement.
In general when we see some highly populated cities in our country we see railway being the most used as public transport mean in comparison to other mode like buses , cabs and trams. This partial dependency is due to the fact that railway has vast coverage of area over our country , constituting every part, owing to which people living in remote places can avail it.Along with it in comparison to other form of communication railway is much cheaper and can be supported by all section of the society. To cater with increased demand our government should invest more money in optimizing the process of operation and increase the availability of more trains in heavily populated areas.
Considering the demand in almost every cities and railway being only mode which can help to mobilize large chunk of masses as a result greater need of more fast trains is increasing. Moreover major freight carriers which runs on busy tracks are usually delayed due to heavy demand of local trains, as a result their is huge loss of money . so an investment must be done to increase railway track to make separate railway track dedicated to freight carriers.
To conclude, In a way to deal with present day scenario of increasing population , it is utmost important for the government to focus in improving railway network rather cashing in any other transportation mean.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, in general, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09642857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81131488289 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6992422843 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.375 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166160544857 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754374264192 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471572972587 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111862882724 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364515505126 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.