Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extend do you agree or disagree with this agreement

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this agreement?

In these days, transit
is
extremely
crucial for day-to-day life. In this regard,
crowd
believe that the authority should spend more budgets on
track
than roads
use
. As far as it
is concerned
to me, I am completely
agreed
with this statement. This essay highlights the major benefit of
line
office
while executive spend more money on it. To
begin
with,
track
are the most efficient and trustable
transport
tools among the
other's
vehicle
supply
.
Similarly
,
caravan
office
are the
immensely
convenient in terms of the
generation
and safety. Nowadays,
nation
have busier schedule, which need to save more
second
and energy they preferred to
use
convoy
business
like bullet
line
. For its instance, one of the researches conducted in Japan shown that most of the
nation
preferred to
use
the
convoy
office
to save their valuable
point
.
Hence
, in this hectic world
society
do
not have more
point
it is better to spend more budget on
rail line
business
by administration to
help
their citizen. Nowadays,
track
business
are the most eco-friendly and safest
transit
in the world. It
helps
to
reduce
the pollution and traffic, while using the motor
use
it creates more pollution and traffic.
line
are most
safer
than the
alternative
shipment
however
,
family
cannot deny the accident
due to the fact
of technical error. To exemplify it, research conducted in Australia in 2012 shown that
rail line
office
are safer and environment friendly.
Thus
, subway
supply
are the more convenient and efficient
transit
use
in the world. All in all,
line
are
the most
essential
supply
for the citizen to
reduce
their
point
consumption, pollution and traffic. It is more trustable in terms of safety. The concern authority should
think
and
make
plan to develop the
line
use
. On the
alternative
hand, every
developing country
cannot afford the subway
supply
in initial phase they need to
think
about
alternative
shipment
too.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, second, similarly, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8164556962 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54758453878 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509493670886 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 18.0 4.76152304609 378% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2546293256 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.111111111 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.38176352705 662% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 64.0 5.01903807615 1275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104346498472 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364494487579 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587430634833 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0204385885774 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401027494119 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.18 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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