The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The percentage of overweight people in the general population has increased considerably resulting in a rise in health-related problems in society. Some people think that introducing more physical education classes in the school curriculum would be an ideal way to tackle this problem. Although I agree that educating children about physical exercises is a good way to start with, I also think that the need for educating adults is paramount.
There are several reasons for teaching school children about physical education. First and foremost, it is far easier to train children than adults. This is because children have more spare time to spend on activities. Adults, on the other hand, are often busy with other important tasks such as a full-time job or business to run. In addition, educating children about physical education will ensure a healthy future generation, which is important if a nation wants to compete and prosper.
However, just educating children would not be enough to secure the health of the current generation. To begin, it is the adults that are mainly becoming overweight and facing the challenges related to it. So it is important that the government and other organization's focus on educating adults. They could do it, for example, by constructing an open gym in residential areas. Moreover, a recent report from the National Health Service UK made it clear that adults are twice as vulnerable as opposed to children. This stresses the importance of providing physical education to adults if we are to reduce the cost of healthcare.
To sum up, there are clear advantages to educating children about physical education, as it helps to secure the health of future generations. That said, I do not think this alone would not make a difference to the health prospects of the current generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, such as, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15100671141 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87652799651 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5311673279 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263432422441 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851822326575 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884979928112 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177231182643 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126286706833 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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