Nowadays Human interaction with animals is one of the most substantial issues that been raised by animals protection groups and syndicates. Undoubtedly, animals are there to ensure humanity progress and survival. But, unfortunately animals are other creatures that feel much pain as human do.
Decades ago, animals were one of the most vital and important means of transportation through centuries, whereas people were used to utilize it in their travels between countries, nations and districts. For example merchants used to travel for displaying and selling their merchandises for foreigners in different places, and therefore that was not possible without exploiting animals for this purpose. Consequently, this kind of utilization cannot be avoided or neglected in such important purpose that demonstrates humanity persistence for existence.
Moreover, Humaneness is the most important beings on the plants. It is absolutely necessary for them to ensure sufficient nutrition resources. For instance, the meet which animals produce has an important role on the humanity’s nutrition system. Also, Tents and rugs are made from sheep's wool or goats' hair. This act of competent uses of animals would be beneficial for the humanity’s survival, sustainability and endurance.
In addition to that, being able to conduct researches and experiments on animals, allow Scientists to discover a new cures for various diseases that endangered human’s existence and has stood for the test of time. For example, diabetes medication, fever and many other remedies that been disclosed only after an immense trails on animals. Accordingly, through this way of researches, humanity been able to save a considerable number of people’s souls. Since scientists were able to apply, monitor and conclude their results based on their experiments on animals and understand the body’s reactions, allergies and recovery period and then releasing their results in order to treat unwell people.
On the other hand, there are a number of researches and experiments were been conducted on animals for unnecessary outputs. It has been shown on a numerous occasions by secret filming in laboratories that a substantial amount of researches was done for cosmetics, not to find a real cures for diseases.
In addition to that, animals been kept in cages for long period, suffer and feel pain without any businesslike result. It was proven in many occasion by animals groups and syndicates that these animals feel pain as much human do. We puny human have had the thought that there is not much we can do to protect and nurse the animals. Therefore, authorities and NOG’s need to pay more attention and sufficient guidance to upgrade people’s consciences about the right of treating animals.
In conclusion, I believe despite the fact that there are a number of reports and evidences of the mistreatments of animals for unnecessary purposes, people still need to employ and exploit animals for their sustainability, progress and prosperity. In the future I think people and animals groups needs to increase people knowledge about animals rights and impotency for the whole universe
- A growing number of people feel that animals should to be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research discuss b 73
- A growing number of people feel that animals should to be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research discuss b 78
- A growing number of people feel that animals should to be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research discuss b 67
- A growing number of people feel that animals should to be exploited by people and they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research discuss b 73
- It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
... substantial issues that been raised by animals protection groups and syndicates. Undou...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...t important beings on the plants. It is absolutely necessary for them to ensure sufficient nutrition...
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Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'cure'?
Suggestion: cure
...als, allow Scientists to discover a new cures for various diseases that endangered hu...
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Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'trail'?
Suggestion: trail
...at been disclosed only after an immense trails on animals. Accordingly, through this w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2697.0 1615.20841683 167% => OK
No of words: 493.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0472364888 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525354969574 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 846.9 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3312322493 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.260869565 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4347826087 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04347826087 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337989771516 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105152844971 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580272048297 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180534709802 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500763073988 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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