with a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing GM foods. what is the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?
Increase of diseases leads to growing concern in whether GM foods are beneficial for human health or not. Many people are of the opinion that producing GM foods is imperative to feed a huge number of population. The pros and cons of this trend will be analyzed in this essay before any conclusions are reached.
To begin with, there are surely many benefits that people can enjoy from this tendency. First, since GM foods usually are prolific, the preference for this food can bring more foods to destitute citizens , which plays an important role in reducing poverty. The high yield of these foods is not only livelihood to farmers but also is a key to improve public health. Take a artificial meat, a GM food, for example. A group of scientists are carrying on a project, funded by the billionaire Bill Gates, trying to creat meat not resulted from livestock breeding. Despite being in progress, the investigation is expected to eliminate starvation around the world. Another advantage of foods made from genetically modified technology is that people can have seeds highly resistant to pest as well as survival under hard condition. As a result, the amount of pesticides and fertilizers is curtailed. In addition, thanks to genetic diversity, there is a surge in the variety of foods combing good features of many orginal foods. For example, watermelon is regarded as a case of point. Red watermelon is the only option in the past, in contrast, yellow watermelon is popular nowadays.
This tendency, however, is not free from drawbacks. Admittedly, GM foods are lucrative but in some cases they have a negative impact on human’s health. Although scientists do not observe evidences to protest these foods, destroying natural rule can cause harm in one way or another. More seriously, many people believe that there is a connection between the widespread cancer and the pervasiveness of GM foods. Apart from that, genetic change makes orginal gene disappear. Subsequently, when it come to the biological aspect, some precious characteristics of plants are vanished.
By the way of conclusion, even concerns relating to GM foods can be deniable, which is overweighted by its advantages in my opinion. The headaches mentioned above will be resolved soon because of the explosion of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in contrast, as a result, as well as, by the way, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1299734748 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88763369828 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599469496021 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2108216954 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9090909091 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206150235119 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546787474017 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668099696798 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126972073497 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573570188743 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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