With a growing world population one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that genetically-modified foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Increasing number of people on the earth introduces new challenges. One of the most important questions to resolve is the need to ensure an appropriate amount of food for all the people. One of the feasible options shared by several individuals is the genetically-modified food. To my opinion genetically-modified food brings more issues than benefits and, thus, should not be considered as a fair approach.
The best solution should meet three main criteria, those are: the food should taste well, it must be safe to eat such products and the production need to be cost-effective. While the genetically-modified food satisfies the first criteria, there is no clarity on its safety and cost-effectiveness. From safety perspective this option requires further research. It is well known that genetically-modified food may provide serious adverse reactions. Scientific research has identified numerous side-effects, including an allergic reactions and other deteriorations to the immune system. Doctors all over the world report significant growth of cases where women cannot have children. And new generations are facing more and more new diseases. Environmental issues and genetically-modified food are named as possible reasons for this problem. Until there is a clear and sufficient evidence of safety, genetically-modified products still raise reasonable concern.
As far as cost-effectiveness is concerned, the production of genetically-modified food does not provide for an economically reasonable solution. The laboratory research requires certain investments. In order to provide the earth population with enough food, new manufacturing plants must be built with a specific expensive equipment installed.
In conclusion, although genetically-modified products are considered as an answer to the growing demand of food on our planet, the use of these products require further research to ensure full safety and cost-effectiveness. Safety of these products has not been proved in a large scale clinical trials. The production of genetically-modified products requires significant investments. For all these reasons, as of today, this solution has not been justified as a feasible option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot been justified as a feasible option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84472049689 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.95442966618 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0651920731 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21788279197 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678367402628 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476533580311 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137999078136 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421483050855 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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