It is true that happiness is a vital key of successful life but majority of people are not able to understand clearly the meaning of being happy or how to be joyful. However, there are some main factors that could make one’s life more pleasure.
First of all, people now have variety of definition of happiness and there are totally different from each other. For example, some people believe that earning a huge amount of money could lead to a pleasure life. Therefore, they will be happy if they could spent money for whatever they want. However, most of people say that they were not satisfied with their life even they got really high income and do not have to worry about money. In fact, a taxi driver or a housekeeper could be happier than a businessmen even though they do not have enough money to splurge on things. For that reason, how to be happy will still a mystery question for everyone in the future.
Secondly, it is easy to understand that money is not the main factor of being happy due to the reason described above. Thus, happiness are not from high standard stuffs such as houses or cars, but it is from the very common thing around us. For majority of parents, growing their children and watch them become a successful person is the most happy thing of their life. In children’s view, happiness is just the time when they playing with their friends or their family. It is no doubt that we are able to find happiness in such a simple things surround us.
In conclusion, happiness is very crucial factor in everyone’s life. It is hard to define the meaning of joyfulness but it is not difficult to become a happy person.
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 73
- Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...efore, they will be happy if they could spent money for whatever they want. However, ...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... money for whatever they want. However, most of people say that they were not satisfied with t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a businessman' or simply 'businessmen'?
Suggestion: a businessman; businessmen
... or a housekeeper could be happier than a businessmen even though they do not have enough mon...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 543, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...able to find happiness in such a simple things surround us. In conclusion, happiness...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not difficult to become a happy person.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59595959596 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46121267303 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505050505051 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7082779578 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208507613197 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854116172101 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493761792691 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154281243617 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502055166332 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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