Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is a common aim among all people. While there is some disagreement over whether most happiness arises during the childhood or the adulthood, I believe that happiness depends on attitude, not the age, of each individual.
On the one hand, childhood can be the happiest, despite of the high pressure of academic achievements, since children have less pressure or responsibilities in general, thus less to worry about. Unlike adults, students generally feel no pressure on earning a good living and looking after others. Instead, they have enough time to discover their hobbies and enjoy it in the sake of realizing themselves and finding their interest. Therefore, it can reasonably said that youth can live their life offers the opportunity to live more happily.
On the other hand, adults may fell a greater happiness and satisfaction because of their greater autonomy. Compared to children, adults no longer need to obey their parents and teachers orders. In addition, they are more free to do whatever they want and become whoever they want to be. For example, drinking alcohol and going on spending on spree are not even prohibited in the adulthood, but this is considered as a big issue in the childhood. Moreover, adults can harness their freedom as a fuel to build a great future by choosing what they love which help building a bright shining future. Therefore, happiness can be experienced in adulthood with enough independence.
In conclusion, although adolescence comes with few responsibilities, adulthood presents the opportunity for greater independence. While both may influence happiness, I believe the key to happiness does not concern to generation, but instead one’s attitude to life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 460, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to build' or 'build'.
Suggestion: to build; build
...e by choosing what they love which help building a bright shining future. Therefore, hap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28832116788 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98939865897 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3728161727 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115004538838 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419421896857 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456922703252 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796893109489 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504282053583 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.