Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Nowadays, happiness is believed very crucial in life by the number of people. While lots of factors are needed to getting this emotion, the way to define it also very hard to understand.
There is a lot of different definition of happiness which is so hard for us to understand clearly. When we mention this feeling, people tend to think about the money which is considered very important in life. For others, staying with the parents and relatives also makes them who feel the warmth from inside. Besides, some people think that living a life which has carefree or without stress will bring them happiness. For example, in Buddhism, human has to face a lot of pain and sorrow, so happiness is the state that they can escape out of this life and go to another world.
So, we will need some factors in order to get the happiness which we can’t live without it. Firstly, living with family and relatives are considered a crucial condition that leads to this feeling. Secondly, we can make and love our close friends who we also will get back from them. Finally, it will the important way that guide to happiness, if we have the right to speak and do what we like. For example, freedom of speak and media is always the criteria in order to assess the happiness of one nation.
In conclusion, although it is hard to have a clear definition of happiness which is achieved by lots of factors, it is very important to our daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 511, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58527131783 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42892166962 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515503875969 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9596186686 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278514269058 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10152477361 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801755878441 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199819256837 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596294302171 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.