People hold conflicting views about whether it is too late to find any solution to save the flora and fauna and avoid the bad repercussions of human activities or there are still remedies available to tackle this issue. This essay discusses both views of this argument and explains why I believe actionable steps can be implemented to improve this situation.
On the one hand, some people think that it is already too late attributable to the rapid decline of the plant and animal species. Some of them have been placed in the Red book, which means they may disappear forever and will never exist anymore. Their departure would be terrible since it would upset the ecosystem's balance. For instance, when there are no trees at the edge of the forest, even a prolonged heavy rain can lead to flooding.
On the other hand, I am still of the opinion that people can use some practical ways to curb this issue. First and foremost, the government should raise public awareness of the consequence of the disappearance of flora and fauna. Thus, people might understand how important animal and plant species is, and they may be more conscious of preserving and protecting them. Secondly, the authorities should restrict the law. Specifically, they can increase the fines and years in prison.
In conclusion, while some individuals think it is too late to do anything to prevent the flora and fauna from human negative effects due to the rapid decline of them, I am still of the belief that raising public awareness and restricting the law can address this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86466165414 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60906589204 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3426958905 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382994423752 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107809076082 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967423505443 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210904455758 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728471361768 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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