Human have made a great technological process in the last hundred years. However, this progress have negative effects on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent centuries, humankind have made various technological advancements, leading to an argument that this trend would impact adversely on ordinary people's lives. In my opnion, I strongly agree with this point of view.
Many opponents would reject this perspective seeing that the state-of-the-art technologies have facilitated human's life than ever such as keeping people abreast of up-to-the-minute information or getting a hold of friends who are studying overseas. However, I would argue that this is no longer the case due to the fact that residents are now being bombarded with diversified information and seldom perceive whether the sources of this is accurate or misleading. Advanced techologies also undermine intimate relations among people. The prime example of this is that more and more people, especially younger generation, have been utilized excessively their technical gadgets like laptops or smartphones rather than appreciating affectionate moments with family and friends.
Another adverse influence of the advent of high technologies would be overall health deterioration. It is true that many adults, particularly IT staff, are sufferring from recurrent symptoms such as eyestrain, backache and so on due to routine habit of keeping their eyes glued to the screens. It is also the case with a vast majority of people in the present day to lead a sendentary lives, which is a precursor to severely chronic diseases like obesity or diabetes. Consequently, the more advanced technology is, the less healthy human beings stay.
In conclusion, I utterly advocate with those who maintain that technological breakthroughs bring numerous detrimental effects on ordinary people's daily lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'staffs'?
Suggestion: staffs
... true that many adults, particularly IT staff, are sufferring from recurrent symptoms...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64478764479 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14695737774 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656370656371 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4619945256 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.909090909 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20045732088 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698541323274 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053083071138 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126223069567 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496212778118 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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