The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The
new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and
further education will be something that continues throughout life.
Having a single career or several career is a problem of controversy. Some people think having several job is not good idea as you can not focus on them and it led to some problem while others claims the opposite thing. Together, the two would have their reasons which I try to explain in the following paragraph.
First and foremost thing we must consider is that concept of work has changed for younger generation. They no longer considered it as tools to earning money. That is partly because of they wanna impact the world and people through their career. With that in mind, they attempt to learn variety of skills and experience several careers as the education is not enough today. For instance, my roommate has a creative idea and having several jobs help her to be familiar with the economical condition and learn many practical things which can not be learn by education or study.
In spite of all possible advantages of having several jobs, there is some disadvantages too. Having several jobs needs spend more time which led some problems in personal life. They have less time for their family. For example, my grandpa has several jobs which occupy his time and had no time for family gathering or play with his children which it led to very weak relationship with my mother. It will be exceedingly hard to say he enjoyed his life as he was often on a mission.
As I mentioned above, people are split on this idea. A recent study done by researcher concluded that people who has further education do it for their interest. In my opinion focusing on a one job and be professional on it is better than be jack on several field and master of nothing.
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- people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do? 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun career seems to be countable; consider using: 'several careers'.
Suggestion: several careers
Having a single career or several career is a problem of controversy. Some peopl...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'several jobs'.
Suggestion: several jobs
...f controversy. Some people think having several job is not good idea as you can not focus o...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
... tools to earning money. That is partly because of they wanna impact the world and people throu...
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Line 2, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...everal jobs help her to be familiar with the economical condition and learn many ...
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Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some disadvantages'?
Suggestion: there are some disadvantages
...ible advantages of having several jobs, there is some disadvantages too. Having several jobs needs spend mo...
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Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'several fields'.
Suggestion: several fields
...ssional on it is better than be jack on several field and master of nothing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62162162162 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45593004852 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7092220675 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252167646177 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889435150395 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721278909205 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156363308186 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341038876186 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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