several individuals said that teenagers must be permitted to make fauls, by contrast, oponents think parents or senior citizents shoud keep children out of making troubles. So do somethings like this is a good way for them to graduate? debate two opinions and give your point of view.
In recently, Thout people in the puberty have been affected dramatically to their psychophisiology which keep them in the crisis. some thinkings in this period of time make adult concentrated more than they used to, It created a circumstance thate they don't want their children fall in mistakes. this factor caused some negative opinions in people subconcious( especially teenagers), thats why youth often have some arguments with their parents. Stuck in the trouble was becaming the common issue in this generation, although if you think back to your childhood, you could also made a mistake. youth is just youth, they are not you, while if you let them to fall in the problem, getting valuable experiences will make them graduate more faster. I have khown that you don't want them to get fauls because of they will feel bored are generate the bad ponit of views are going to manipulate them. But give teens the freedom is perhap no wonder they will stand up after they got fall down.
As i've mentioned above, when children recieve freedom, youth was lived in new environment that this place let children do more creativity and think more vividly. I didn't said you must accept all their actions but product this type of researchs so in some days, you gonna get a increadible result.
New generation was not us at this time or futhure. Let them out of the occupied from adults in many ways was always the best sollution. teenagers need to graduate , to join the society to khown that everydays, what does their family experience. So your son or daughter ties the knot with you more and more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... make fauls, by contrast, oponents think parents or senior citizents shoud keep c...
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...eople subconcious especially teenagers, thats why youth often have some arguments wit...
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...st sollution. teenagers need to graduate , to join the society to khown that every...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81172839506 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52451366223 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608024691358 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5233391798 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121014724031 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407335090065 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571821119977 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838083821184 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253313319837 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.