If people go to live in a new country, they should follow local customs and traditions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: So
...another country for the future studies. so they have to follow rules and regulatio...
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Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: As
...w rules and regulation of that new city.As all foregniers want to follow their own...
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Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...low their own ruels and code of counduct . According to my preception, I agree...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Following
... respect the culture of their residents.Following customs plays a significant role in th...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...wing customs plays a significant role in their country and foreigners want all na...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...foreigners want all native should follow .Additionally immigrants face so much pro...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...reigners want all native should follow .Additionally immigrants face so much problems such a...
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Suggestion: Additionally,
...reigners want all native should follow .Additionally immigrants face so much problems such a...
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Suggestion: many
...follow .Additionally immigrants face so much problems such as treated unfairly or ex...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...l be many conflicts between foreigners. But on the other hand , new comers shoul...
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Suggestion: ,
...n foreigners. But on the other hand , new comers should not follow other peop...
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Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...should not follow other people tradition .As they lost their right towards their o...
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Suggestion: As
...ould not follow other people tradition .As they lost their right towards their own...
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...ould not follow other people tradition .As they lost their right towards their own...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: And
...st their right towards their own nation.And if they blindly follow their customs
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 615.0 1615.20841683 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 117.0 315.596192385 37% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 4.20363070211 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87087653286 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717948717949 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 506.74238477 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.0507233008 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227765112546 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109278671101 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639804684608 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159936557639 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330884456839 0.056905535591 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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