Someone lightly said, "work is worship". human working for country to create farm, building, industries or cities which clearly show that human cannot live without the work. i strongly disagree with the given statement. i will present my argument in support of my point of view in upcoming paragraphs.
First of all, it is commonly show that human is creative by nature. living work less by human being is for certain period of time because a person dependent on money for most of their lives. if one stop working, he or she out of revenue in the couple of months and consequently it will affect on their state of mind. Therefore, person has sense of achievement which always encourage him or her to get her goal of life and fulfill essential needs which he or she want in life.
Moving further, work is source of entertainment that provide us happiness by getting our targets. Living jobless or any activity spending time is too difficult and without any work movement we can become dull and pessimistic character. it can also affect our health condition, we will become fatty with several body pains and diseases. Therefore, job provide us respect in the society that create an ideally or admirable image to towards people and young children. it can improve your confidence and strength.
To conclude, the idea of being ideally seems to be tempting or short while but in long term it is bring pain and boldum. I think that people would be overall more content with a life including amount of time dedicated to working.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, while, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58647502911 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8556387914 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23027376239 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614650972426 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059709961221 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121859504453 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578215572842 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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