Hassels like racism and xenophobia has become a controversial topic to discuss thesedays. These attitudes are taught to someone not by birth which futher leads several hurdles in society but it can be resolved by taking some measures. Thus, I will delve into my ideology regarding it in successive contexts with plausible epitomes.
Myriads of reasons which creates racism or develop the thought of it. First of all, these days ample of contents are present which promotes a specific religion or race by demeaning others so, to overcome this, government ought to ban such things which target others in order to show themselves superior in many terms. Even children experience these things from their surroundings since they are totally unaware from them later it turns into a robust sense of superiority over others which makes them racists.
Moreover, government should conduct awareness campaigns to educate their citizens about the issues which rise form xenophobia in society and harms the equality of their nations. If education system add some information about these in study course, then juveniles fully aware about it from their initial years and assist them to sustain harmony among them. Finally, globalisation is also contribute to stop discrimination and makes world to better place for everyone.
To sum up, I firmly believe that if government authorities and individuals should join thier hand as well as take it their own responsibility then racism like several dire issues easily mitigate from society.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: vishal19balar
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also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29338842975 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67799521222 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690082644628 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5993705 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.1 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181698904936 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654887034828 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470714134273 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104928880473 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487022184549 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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