If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught , not born with, the problems that come from them can be resolved. Discuss the view and give our own opinion.
Racism and xenophobia are commonly find in whole world. This term means discrimination on basis of cast, religion and gender These types of attitudes we taught by our society, parents as well as our guides. If these attitudes are not taught then it can be solved easily.
Racism and xenophobia are quite popular attitude nowadays and there are numerous reason behind it. First and foremost reason is that every child from their birth has been taught these behavior by their family. They always behave just like their parents. Secondary, society in which offspring grow up learn these attitude. Sometime they face racism themselves so that they also react the same as they treat. For instance, white our black, needy or wealthy racism are faced by many people and they taught it rapidly.
Every problem comes with the possible solution. If the problem such as racism and xenophobia are taught effectively in home as well as schools then it can be resolved quickly. If our guide taught it well then whole scenario of world are changed. There will be felling of brotherhood and humanity. No one can feel alone and they feel very comfortable with others. Moreover, there will be situation of equality. As result of it, racism and xenophobia will not exist in world.
According to my opinion, racism and xenophobia cause many problem but if our parent or guide taught it in effective manner then problem related to it can be solved. In addition to it, government also implement some rule and regulation related to this problem.
To conclusion, parents are our first teacher before school and we learn a lot from them. So, parents should taught good behavior to their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95053003534 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42478019429 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0659287265 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.05 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.15 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367979791366 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102082776455 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770064562153 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199348773765 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640226328881 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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