If you are given an option for study, which one would you choose to do whether a book, computer or an excursion?
There are multitudes of benefits attached to studying through an excursion. Not in books only, nor yet in High-tech media, but often also in a jaunt, a student can exercise freedom of choice over learning. The advantage and the disadvantage spreads over to all Medias, may it be books, machines or outdoor study.
What we read in books, magazines or journals are mostly fiction. To get attached to fiction is to get detached to originality. Our attachment to unreal elements put us suppressed from being acquainted with an eternal verity that no one can efface. No book publishing can propel you to the point than do the excursion, you yearn or tempt. Then, the advent of technology- computer and the internet- widely popular and the most versatile medium ever in the relics of science, has brought people of the world closer together and has helped us by providing solutions to whatever problems we have. The mastery of expressions has almost died down. Though no invention other than the computer could have solved human purposes so well, however, it has detached us from the nature that we would relish all to ourselves.
An excursion, however, much as it being about visiting a location in fact, has in it for the students who wish to perform a rigorous analysis an opportunity to be responsible for one’s action over purpose. Whatever you read, you read with effort and speculation. An excursion renders no less information than do the books or computer. However, in an excursion, you would come across some facts that might have been obsolete overtime. This would, sometimes likely, take you in dismay, and you would jot down facts to the point on your paper, only enough being retained to supplement vogue. It is also important to remember that expedition to students should be permitted to whatever extent is deemed necessary.
To sum up, what would be more true than the eyes itself? Since jaunt is all about exertion in the field by oneself and so it would be credible in all respects. Pros are easy to reap and cons are difficult to avoid, and this pertains to whatever media exists in the world. So, all the Medias are distinctly different from each other and the selection depends upon necessity or efficiency of a media.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to whatever extent is deemed necessary. To sum up, what would be more true than ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a medium' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a medium; media
...depends upon necessity or efficiency of a media.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'in fact', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.201388888889 0.247107183377 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.171296296296 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0555555555556 0.0946595960268 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0578703703704 0.0501214627716 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0532407407407 0.0437548338989 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106481481481 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0439814814815 0.0403226058552 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62961394893 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0486111111111 0.0326793684256 149% => OK
Particles: 0.00694444444444 0.00163938923432 424% => OK
Determiners: 0.101851851852 0.0861772015684 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0300925925926 0.021408717616 141% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115740740741 0.011925033212 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2244.0 1933.35771543 116% => OK
No of words: 384.0 316.048096192 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84375 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.359375 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260416666667 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2109375 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114583333333 0.137316102897 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62961394893 2.80594681477 94% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.037074148 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580729166667 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 68.087554616 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0677203265 49.517814964 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 127.492653851 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.2416666667 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.24590163934 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256286362616 0.332605444948 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0934845038417 0.102741220458 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0546767215266 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.447459046556 0.534860350844 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131742590265 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100582478406 0.134430193775 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709441253449 0.0742795772207 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.333256765516 0.324371583561 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0548693398286 0.0638462369009 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174874735683 0.228012699653 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916423227595 0.058150111329 158% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.