If you could invent something new, what product would you develop?"
Use specific details and reasons to explain why this invention is needed.
Future is always a mysterious field which has been reached and explored extensively and currently, only high-tech equipments which are only averagely exact help a person predicts his/her future. Obviously, seeing what will surely happen in the time after present is an expectation of almost individuals. Therefore, I always expect to work in sufficient and necessary conditions to develop my own project: the machine knows the future because of two reasons: it enables people to know their future exactly then they will arrive at sensible decisions and the superstition problems will be declined dramatically, especially in Eastern countries.
First and foremost, this machine plays a significant role in helping people to live a better and easier life. Indeed, understanding what will undoubtedly happen in the future supports everyone to reach their right decisions and achieve their targets. For instance, after graduated university, a student will know his future job and then he will realize the ways to apply for his/her favorable work environment. Also, using this machine enables an investor to know whether to participate in a company or not and supports him to put his money in at the right time and in the right place. Thus, the knowing future machine helps individuals attain their goals quickly and efficiently and lessens the risks they have to face in their complex life as well.
Finally, this intellectual machine is very useful in decreasing the superstition problems, particularly in Eastern cultures. Yet, some different arguments lay on emphasis on other factors that are of more important influence on the reduction such as government policies or development of particularism. Obviously, these factors themselves also have proved to considerably contribute to the decrease in bad practices. However, it is undeniable the importance of this machine because it shows a person’s future and helps him get rid of current deadlock. Specifically, when one feels stuck because he has to face too many choices in his daily life, he tends to receive advices from others in the forms of superstition such as fortunetelling or worshiping supernatural forces. This amazing equipment can help him to select the best options and arrive at right decisions. That is the reason why knowing the future not only orients the people’s future, but it also reduces the evil customs as well, especially in Eastern coutries.
As discussed, regardless of people’s differences in ideology, communal customs and practice an individual insight and outlook as well, the knowing future machine still plays an important role in orienting their future, supporting them to come to right decisions, lessening risk considerably as well as declining the evil customs drammtically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, as for, as to, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39770114943 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01676821687 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55632183908 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2538655973 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.75 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1875 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0547939507742 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022451486458 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214019741491 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340591835268 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228916178085 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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