With increasing number of endangered species, more attention is being paid to biodiversity. Although maintaining biodiversity is a complex issue, there are several adoptable solutions for governments and individuals.
The first suggestion is to prohibit illegal hunting and related trade of wild animals. Commercial activities concerning catching wild animals and selling products made from them should be forbidden by governments firmly. Elephants, for example, have become endangered due to excessive killing for large amounts of ivory used for decoration. There is no need for illegal killing of these animals with plenty of artificial substitutes for natural materials like ivory. These species will live and reproduce stably without threat from human activities.
Another effective solution is to restore vegetation that is ruined by humans. Reforestation in some areas can be achieved by fertilising soil and planting trees. Forests play an important role in providing habitats for a large number of species so abundant biodiversity can be restored with reforestation.
The final advice is to reduce pollution caused by individuals. It is advisable to choose eco-friendly products that consume less energy and produce smaller pollution in daily life. Also, public transport emits a smaller amount of greenhouse gas than private vehicles. This can contribute to slowing the process of global warming so species can be faced with less problems caused by climate change.
In conclusion, biodiversity deserves more attention with increasing number of endangered species. In response to this issue, steps can be taken to contribute to biodiversity by both individuals and governments.
- The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 67
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features 73
- Nowadays most people are using a lot of online language translation apps Are the advantages more than the disadvantages Write an essay of no less than 250 words 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...mportant role in providing habitats for a large number of species so abundant biodiversity can be...
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Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...al warming so species can be faced with less problems caused by climate change. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77290836653 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06411542738 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1432360529 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280047873112 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840236177489 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881382618999 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175913698143 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950166404092 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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